I'm publishing Episode 2 one step at a time, as I'm quite busy these days and I don't want to delay the ebook too much. Also, I'm interested in gathering some early feedback on this work.
What I'm looking for :
- comments on the readability / comprehensibility of the text itself, both from the perspective of someone knowledgeable about the android internals and of someone with no previous exposure.
- flaws in contents or reasoning
- ideas and perspective on things, which may also influence chapter 3
- obvious typos etc. :-)
What I'm not looking for:
- dogmatic feedback based on religious attachment to some approach or notion
- meticulous copy editing (not that the text doesn't need it :-)
- academic-like reviews (I'm a published author - I know the game and I don't like it)
What I'm looking for :
- comments on the readability / comprehensibility of the text itself, both from the perspective of someone knowledgeable about the android internals and of someone with no previous exposure.
- flaws in contents or reasoning
- ideas and perspective on things, which may also influence chapter 3
- obvious typos etc. :-)
What I'm not looking for:
- dogmatic feedback based on religious attachment to some approach or notion
- meticulous copy editing (not that the text doesn't need it :-)
- academic-like reviews (I'm a published author - I know the game and I don't like it)
