A draft version of Episode 2, with just Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 completed, and with a few pointers (mostly to remind myself) to the contents of chapters 3 to 6 + Appendix A and B, is now available for download.
If you read Episode 1, the introduction may look similar, as I'm describing the same exploration project, but it's actually different, as Episode 2 is completely different in intent from Episode 1.
I'm publishing Episode 2 one chapter at a time, as I'm quite busy these days and I don't want to delay the ebook too much. Also, I'm interested in gathering some early feedback on this work.
The kind of feedback I'm looking for:
- comments on the readability / comprehensibility of the text itself, both from the perspective of someone knowledgeable about the android internals and of someone with no previous exposure.
- flaws in contents or reasoning.
- ideas and perspective on things, which may also influence chapter 4.
- obvious typos etc. :-)
What I'm not looking for:
- dogmatic feedback based on religious attachment to some approach or notion
- meticulous copy editing (not that the text doesn't need it :-)
Thanks you all guys, and if you like it, share it :-).
If you read Episode 1, the introduction may look similar, as I'm describing the same exploration project, but it's actually different, as Episode 2 is completely different in intent from Episode 1.
I'm publishing Episode 2 one chapter at a time, as I'm quite busy these days and I don't want to delay the ebook too much. Also, I'm interested in gathering some early feedback on this work.
The kind of feedback I'm looking for:
- comments on the readability / comprehensibility of the text itself, both from the perspective of someone knowledgeable about the android internals and of someone with no previous exposure.
- flaws in contents or reasoning.
- ideas and perspective on things, which may also influence chapter 4.
- obvious typos etc. :-)
What I'm not looking for:
- dogmatic feedback based on religious attachment to some approach or notion
- meticulous copy editing (not that the text doesn't need it :-)
Thanks you all guys, and if you like it, share it :-).
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